The Light Behind the Eyes

This one was pretty short and isn’t finished, but I liked that it took place in the future yet it didn’t seem much different than today. The author describes the technology but the working conditions are exactly the same: terrible and soul crushing. I thought that it was funny that was what didn’t change in 100 year at least of progress from now. To me it gave the story a realistic edge and made me sympathize with the protagonist. I’m curious to see what direction the story goes in next, I would love it if it became a fantasy vs technology battle but that’s just me.

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