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I really enjoy this story since the first time I read it, and it gets even better with every revision. There’s a bigger sense of panic early on which makes more sense, how else would someone react if they realized a piece of their finger was missing? The protagonist drives on and on, completely aloneContinue reading “Click 3”

I can’t help but feel very frustrated as this author has only written fanfiction for this class even though we’ve told him over and over again that it doesn’t work because he’s assuming that the audience already has knowledge of how the world works in the story. He just added on some more scenes thatContinue reading “Pokemon”

I don’t like how there doesn’t seem to be any quotation marks for dialogue but I really like the idea how your personality is programmed when you’re a teenager by the universe or something and people are divided into different traits randomly. And it’s not a superficial title either, you are influenced by the zodiacContinue reading “Zodiac”

I think that there’s a Netflix show or something with a similar title but it’s about a guy aggressively stalking his neighbor because he’s in love with her but he’s crazy about it. I was expecting something similar but it was a normal love story between teenagers one summer at least so far. The pacingContinue reading “HER”

I like the new parts where Maria’s school day is described, it really takes me back to high school except I didn’t have a rough living condition like her. I still really admire the Coco like aesthetic and the emphasis on family. The ending is kind of concerning though, revealing that Maria got hurt somehowContinue reading “Sweet Dreams Revision”

With a title like this I was kind of expecting something more. The series of events that played out were pretty cool, but because of the short sentence structure it all feels very rushed and there isn’t much emotion behind the words in what is supposed to be an emotional and heart pounding event forContinue reading “The Final Game”

At first I thought that she was a neanderthal or some kind of mutation. I still don’t have a confirmation at what the main focus of the story is, but my own guess is that she’s a parasite. After killing a normal girl who wandered into her midst, the creature was able to absorb partContinue reading “Gap Girl”

I thought that could be an alternate title to the story, as that seems to be the protagonist’s opinion. Well I’m not sure I can call them that, they seem more like an antagonist for killing the girl who ruined their relationship and paralyzed their boyfriend. Somehow the main character never got caught and itContinue reading “Lying Whores Deserve to Die”

Honestly I mentally cringed when I realized that this was Outsiders fanfic but it’s really well written and you don’t really even need to know about the movie/book to get it. I feel like most of the story was just rambling, but I did like the ending. But I don’t feel like these characters wouldContinue reading “Sunset”

It seems to be a story about a little girl thrown in the trash and rescued by a drug addict who just uses her as a servant and to keep herself from overdosing. Kiko’s adoptive mother is a hot mess who talks badly about the little girl behind her back. But when she overdosed, KikoContinue reading “Kiko”