Author Archives: Lucinda Slattery

I do love suspenseful stories, but the use of the word curdle in the first place confuses me. Although waking up with your hands red just sounds like waking up to your period starting. All joking aside, I do like the mystery involved of what the hell is actually happening while the protagonist keeps wakingContinue reading “Imagine”

We haven’t really had a part two for a story written yet but I like how it starts right after the first part ended. I theorized last time she might not be aware of being a werewolf, but that’s clearly not the case and she even has a clean up guy. Though she’s still reallyContinue reading “A Full Moon’s End”

I love the line “shaggy blonde hair that would make any surfer jealous” It’s pretty easy to see Cameron as a child psychologist, I think that would really suit him. I’ve seen him with his three year old son and he never gets bent out of shape. But the personality of the characters are muchContinue reading “Bedside Manner”

This story has really good descriptions of the protagonist’s home and the strict childhood they recount bitterly being raised by a single mother based on how the protagonist describes their upbringing. It sounds like their mother was well off but had a very cold attitude towards their child and didn’t tolerate rule breaking. For God’sContinue reading “Enveloped”

I know that the title is the Dragon Returns but we never even find out why it’s called that. I was pretty disappointed that we got another self insert fanfiction that isn’t even finished and it wasn’t even as good as the last one. If I didn’t read the Bleach manga when I was eightContinue reading “Fanfiction 2”

This was a lot more scary to read than the last edition, I couldn’t finish it the first time reading because it was after dark. I like that the author kept the previous scenes especially the part with the finger. I thought that it was really well written. The new parts with the protagonist tryingContinue reading “Click (Revisited)”

This was really hard to get through because I can completely understand how the author is feeling. I went through a terrible relationship for three years that only ended because I couldn’t take it anymore. I don’t ever want to date again. In that kind of intense first relationship it’s too easy to lose yourselfContinue reading “Hey You”

Suddenly I’m reminded of the movie Coco with all of the spanish culture and the characters talking about the Day of the Dead and stuff. I really like the characters, they’re really fun to read about and they have realistic problems and day to day issues. I just wish that the story was longer, IContinue reading “Sweet Dreams”

This was a really emotional and gripping story. Just writing about it in a review is pretty difficult for me since my grandfather died in hospice a couple years ago. Being torn between the game he loved and the father he loved more than anything, a young boy has to play in a game heContinue reading “Goodbye Dad”

You always know that when a character in fiction says something like “Nothing could go wrong for me” that they’re basically inviting disaster into their lives and the audience knows that some kind of shit is going to go down. I love the different titles for the story and the name “Steve Stevenson,” it’s soContinue reading “Fuck the Milkman”