Pokemon

I can’t help but feel very frustrated as this author has only written fanfiction for this class even though we’ve told him over and over again that it doesn’t work because he’s assuming that the audience already has knowledge of how the world works in the story. He just added on some more scenes that I guess makes the first chapter feel more complete but this still feels very unfinished. Overall it’s not satisfying to read and there just isn’t much to the story