The Final Game

With a title like this I was kind of expecting something more. The series of events that played out were pretty cool, but because of the short sentence structure it all feels very rushed and there isn’t much emotion behind the words in what is supposed to be an emotional and heart pounding event for someone who’s really invested in the outcome. Plot points aren’t really explained, like the thing with the main character’s mom at the beginning, is she dead or what? I think it has potential but I kind of felt disappointed