We haven’t really had a part two for a story written yet but I like how it starts right after the first part ended. I theorized last time she might not be aware of being a werewolf, but that’s clearly not the case and she even has a clean up guy. Though she’s still really upset about murdering her guests so we know that it wasn’t intentional.
The flashback is used well to show what happened to Malcolm, showing that Jennifer has PTSD over what her other personality forces her to do on a monthly basis. And… she ends up killing herself in the last page because she can’t take the guilt of killing so many people, even though she had someone in her life who was trying to help.
That’s really heavy… I really don’t like talking about suicide but I kind of have to now. I just feel like that’s a terrible way to end a story and feels very rushed, but I liked the other parts that showed how Jennifer got away with murder all these years.
Lunar Writing 