There are only minor errors for this story, I counted six in total. The story was really good in how the expectation for the genre is set up. The two main characters are guys who get to meet a hot celebrity for an interview. They are really excited and talk to her for a bit and find out that she’s a really nice and cool person. I thought that Malcolm was making out with Jennifer at first, but it turned out that she’s a werewolf and ate him. I seriously did NOT see that twist coming and I love it. It’s obvious what it is when it happens, but the protagonist’s response is 100 percent what any sane person would feel like. He just freaks the hell out and tries to run away, while mourning his friend. The description is so brutal, he even has to fish around in his friend’s remains to get the keys to his car.
Honestly, I think that it’s the best ending that we’ve had so far. It’s very final and open ended but it’s still satisfying for me. I can’t help but wonder if Jennifer knew that she was a werewolf and just forgot that it would be a full moon, based on how regretful she is the following morning, based on how little she seemed to be surprised at the outcome. I guess that she could have just been bitten and turned that night, and was in denial about being a werewolf
Lunar Writing 